All Comments on 'Max Porn Inc. Pt. 02'

So besides a few minor grammatical errors this was a very well written chapter. Will be on the lookout for the next chapter.

i really loved the story and can't wait to see where it goes next.

And I'll enjoy this all the more

Well thoughtout, good character development. Like the direction you took with Max and Jan. From the beginning I thought they might end up living together? Thanks, can't wait for the next installment!

Great story. My only thought was that there should have been more dialog about Jan finding the video of Kacey. Looking forward to additional chapters.

I am so looking forward to the next instalment, please don't let it be too long in coming - pun intended !

The first chapter was Great. Then, like most chapters do, it goes down hill from there. The acting and the handcuffs was just too weird.... And then there was the Anal...

Don't know where it goes from here and I'm not going to find out.

OMG. Segue is still definitely your long suit. Next chapter please . . . .