All Comments on 'May'

...desperate people write stories about desperate men because all those desperate readers anjoy them. So what? Everyone has his audience. I had hoped this story would might have a slight turn near the ending, letting him appear a little less wim..ah...desperate. Nevertheless well written.

Loved reading your writing, fantastic reader experience. thank you, maybe that is a good ending for this story, but more stories to come, there is a lot to this topic