All Comments on 'May/December Romance Ch. 05'

loved this chapter... so loving ... and HOT ..

anticipating what's to come in Ch 6

hope to see this story continued shortly

the whole series is the perfect combination of tender, tentative relationship building and hot, wild, steamy sex. perfection!

Would very much like to read more. Very well done. Some typing error, mispelled words, and wrong word usage. Loved the story line.

C'mon!

You gotta write more of this! I adore the relationship between Lori and Karen. Just one thing though, I did notice that in earlier parts of this you have gotten Lori and Karens names round the wrong way. But i adore the storyline!

This is developing into a great story! You explore the psychology of a subbie very well.

Only concern I have is that you moved from the first person tot he third person. At first it really was you that was telling the story about yourself and now it is an onlooker.

Any chance you'll continue? :)