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by Dinsmore

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AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
Nice, Nice, Nice Story

Did I mention it was a NICE story.

Kinda sick in the beginning but a wonderful turn around and it seems like everyone lived happily ever after.

gatorhermitgatorhermitover 17 years ago
Interesting story

Your last two stories have been significantly different - no airplanes, etc. This one is a very pleasant fantasy. Glad that your writing is taking different directions.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Son's old Girlfriend says hello!

Loved this story where father receives a visit from his son's ex-girlfriend who 'has been like a daughter to him.' The biggest question isn't about the story; it's about - one of my favorite writers, Mr. Dinsmore. What kind of vitamins are you taking - and where can I get some? *grins* Loved the story - so different from your usual fare. Terrific Write!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Hmmmmm

Love your romances.... this was.... just another... like any other....

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good

Not as good as your best but still an interesting read. After 15 or 20 years, maybe Cialis won't be enough. Or maybe her orientation will have changed. Of course, he will be nearing 70 so it don't make a whole lot of difference anyway.

Boyd

How about a Loving Wife story. Two of the three you posted are not up to your usual standards. The half-way decent one, Perfect Wife, Perfect Maid, was as much as a Group Sex as L.W. story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I loved this story...

This is the first comment I've ever left. I enjoy all of your stories, but this one really touched me, how he was truly concerned for her and urging her to take care of unfinished business. The kink was great, too. ;)

YornHYornHalmost 14 years ago
Too kinky - Too slutty

The early part of the story depicted a true cheap slut - lying, cheating and open for anybody (apparently)

Later, you did a good job of turning that impression around - well, not around, but she did change into a slut for just her man and not for general use. If we can believe her, she also became a one-man woman.

I wish them luck - but, as a famous president once said, - "trust, but verify".

As always, GREAT STORY!!!!

Ca501Ca501over 11 years ago
Direct

& to the point. You succeeded in your stated goal of the story.

TavadelphinTavadelphinover 9 years ago
WOW -= OK some very fucked up shoit there -

And some remarkable characters -

Again you can almost believe it is happening - it is a huge stretch - no pun intended - but they feel damn near real.

What a life LOL

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