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All Comments on 'May I Borrow Some Salt Please?'

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acupacupalmost 8 years ago
Good story

But the conclusion was a bit quick.

Acup

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Nice enjoyable story - to a point.

The somewhat buildup was suddenly thrust into the sudden climax!

Let the story and characters develop a bit more!

We felt like we were rushed to a one night stand in 750 words or less!

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I'm just a simple island lady with a penchant for romance and still looking for like-minded romantics. I love to write about ... the islands.