All Comments on 'Maya Pt. 01'

Wow! A great beginning, and I can't wait for more. Wonderfully told.

Oh, Rabbitman, me thinks you are getting ready to take us on another one of your magical love story rides! Her mother, daughter and ex in Poland. His mother in Florida obviously a bit clingy to her son in New York. 20 year age difference. Just what could possibly go wrong with this scenario before we get to happy ever after? Bet you have a couple other moguls hidden from us at the moment. Ah well, you haven’t disappointed me so far love your fantasies. Got my E-Ticket let ‘s ride!

Cheers

SAGE

Great start! Please continue.

This is a marvelous love story, and the first chapter of what will hopefully be many more. The author promises "more to come". Let us hope that this is the case. Five stars.

Loved the start, and now am waiting for "more to come" ..... WHEN?????

Oh man - Rabbitman55 - what are you doing with me? All those great stories that got me but never will be completed.

Only some of your multiple part stories had an nice decent ending. But this one just started and stopped. I need to know what will happen with Maya, Ira and all their beloved ones.

Please - please let this story continue.