by XXNoraJeanXX
The title says it all. Keep writing but get an editor to clean up your english.
There were some typos but overall the English was far better than most I read on here. In fact, I find it funny when people bash people for typos or the occasional grammatical error. It's a free story that no one forced you to read. If you don't like it just stop reading. Anyway, thank you for the story it was a good read.
Hope that you will write more about Maya.... Lox seems to be an interesting character.
That was depressing and should have been listed under rape
This really was a wonderful story! A few spelling errors here and there, but the grammar was fine and the pacing of the story was great! I like the set up (not too long, which i appreciate) and the descriptions were well written, too. Not much dialogue, but that suited the story fine. I'd love to see a sequel or continuation, but this story is just the perfect mouthful of fun already. Thanks for sharing it!