All Comments on 'Maybe, Maybe Not Ch. 02'

a superior story. well-written, with the taste of reality that really got my attention! ]

there is a next one, right? Where he finally, tenatively, touches her.

Yes, get your Erotic passport because if you read this story you'll know you are in the kingdom of Erotica. This story flows, almost magically, those short paragraphs hurtles it along at the speed of a jet plane. What can be more erotic than a young woman's thoughts.

what an amazing piece. loved every second of it. very original style and the sexual tension just builds and builds. the rhythm of the prose makes it read like poetry and draws the reader in magnificently.

please do not be tempted to add to this piece. instead, if you want to continue their adventure then may i suggest you do it in different style. if you carry on where you've left off i think you would seriously run the risk of spoiling what is a perfect bit of literature. erotic or otherwise.

very well done.