All Comments on 'May's Massage Parlour'

This story was so hot until the ending and wtf happened? No explanation !!!

You went from a 5 to a 3 for that. If you decide on a chapter 2 you need to explain what you told her and why is she so happy

I can slightly relate to the Mother in law theme *5* stars and thanks for writing!

Nice story but the ending left me wanting.

Still, a nice story

THANKS

I was disappointed with the ending. What did you tell her?

There will be a second chapter! And John's 'brainwave' will be revealed.

Wife smiled when she learned you frequented a massage parlor and her mother worked there? Needs more information or second posting. Mother, father and daughter had been having sex for years. And go from there.

I gave you four stars instead of five because the ending wasn’t very good, sorry must do better next time

Yeah, you done fucked up a very good story................ 3 stars

ending left me hanging,,,,

I give this a 4 because he should have ditched his wife for the mother in law

Loved the story up to the last. I have to agree with the others. The story was. Great, but the ending stunk. It almost recked the whole thing, sorry about that.

Loved the story but it's no where near finished, don't you authors know to write a story and publish it when it is complete

Should do a part 2 with the missing ending, bit disappointed with the ending of this sadly.

I loved the story up until the ending. How am I going to use his excuse if you don't tell us what it was? lol Anyway, just fix the ending. It really sucked!

That was a disappointment

I like your stories usually. This was a cheating husband, a desperate MIL, and a stupid cold fish wife. None of those are the makings of a good story, and you proved it by not being able to finish it. I do give you points for trying, I SAID TRYING, to make it seem like the cheating dirt bag was clever and turned it around. It didn't work. I didn't vote because that would bring down your score.

Started out ok then got better but the ending really is disappointing

I would suggest to edit your story to end at:

"She shook her head, so it was still a no. We left it at that. However, I was now determined to make it up to her on Tuesday, at May's Massage Parlour."

Delete everything after the above paragraph. It would make a much better Chapter 1.

I gave you five stars for the story So maybe you would do a chapter 2 that would fix that fucked up ending!

I enjoyed the story until the very end. I can't imagine the parlor would have divulged that much info on one of their regular customers. I hope chapter two has better ending.

The beginning was bad so I skipped to the end it was worse. 1*

absolutely superb...

loved it, i wish my father in law would be my masseur