by Quillpad
I loved the first chapter and this one just gets better. Very well written and the content is so erotic. We all know where this is going, but take your time getting there, I want a lot more wanks before we do.
This is so hot!! Great story line. Fucking her husband and dreaming about Danny. You pulled it off nicely.
Wow...such a lucky gal...Martin is great at pussy eating...and you have a voyeur nephew. So looking forward to more...
As the train crest the hill and starts to gain speed, if only we didn't already know about the turn at the bottom. Exciting and sad all at the same time - well done! 5*
Totally believable and exciting.
Is there anyone writing better than this on this site?
Very well written feeling Danny in her when it was Martin
'Love your story! But there's just one thing, when you said "inferring that Danny was some type of puppy to be trained to do tricks", you meant "implying". "infer" is not a synonym for "imply", "infer" is a synonym for "surmise". I'm sorry, 'can't help it. I'm just a grammar, (and diction), geek.
You have to write chapter 3 if you havnt done so allready.
We want to read what you and Danny get up to in the future..........................01/08/21