by Taxesdaddy13
There was too much going on in this story, a lot of it nonsensical. He started sleeping with his mother when he was 8 but had never seen her naked body until he was an adult?? But the main thing was it has very little description of the mother's body, or anyone's body.
What a great story I am so hard I wish I was there to watch and join in.
Great story let's have more.
Nay-sayers should not read the Incest section. It might warp their minds!
Good story although shy on descriptives.
Hope to come across more from you.
Personally, I liked the lack of description of bodies. The people and their relationships matter, not their all too often "perfect" bodies. 4 stars, easy.
Well damn .
Have you ever read / heard a story and it's written in such a way it sounds like it probatum from personal experience ?
Either way , nice story .
Another Texan to add to my collection! Must be the water or maybe the air but I have found the best yarn spinners all live in Texas! Yeah the prose could use a little polish but the yarn was pure gold. The writing polish will come with practice keep writing. I want to read more of your stories. This was my first sample of your work. Going back for more and hope more new ones show up before I finish your current library!
Be safe, stay healthy and keep writing please. You have talent.
Cheers
SAGE
This is a good story. I don't care for your writing style and the horrible grammar but it is still hot. Maybe get an editor and readers will love your writing even more.
Read again changed my vote from 1/5 to 4/5. I liked the story this time around
Very nice story did not care when it went from sex too 5 years later with nothing between you should have written more into the swinging to every related person was all having sex together and then add the children for mother and son. Gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!