All Comments on 'Me and Mrs. G'

Phenomenal start! Can’t wait to hear what happens next. It is so hard to remember those days when we were inexperienced and thinking that only we wanted it.

Wonderful job so far! I've always loved stories about women teaching young guys.

You captured it well. It would be nice seeing him trying to fight his instinct and failing. Mistakes are all part of the learning process. I can't wait for the next part.

Very good story !

hope theres more??

Nicely done. Doesn't try to make too much happen all at once.

Excellent..!! Loved it....

Great storytelling. lol the build up. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

This really is an enjoyable story and well written. I can’t wait for more — like a shower scene!

Loved it!!! Can't wait for the follow-up.

Wow! So many comments in such a short time. I will wrack my brains to see if I can remember what happened next. Actually I will never forget it so I hope you enjoy it.

Great build Up. Captures an age of naive innocence/ ignorance really well. Let’s have some more please!

What a lovely story of our past. Loved the way it was gently and lovingly told and nicely descriptive without the wham bam thank you mam that we find so often. I remember the naivety of my youth in the same way....and how to hide the evidence of what happened under the sheets most nights. Mother never mentioned it on wash days.

Looking forward to any future chapters. A.

Nice premise.

But the sex was too mechanical. And too rushed.

Four stars.

Good start, continue writing. After college I had a FWB with the landlady, actually the owners daughter, 30. She mentioned one day she had a water bed and a few weeks latter I tested it out with her. :)

I like it.

Very nice .

Interesting premise.

Needed more details about what was actually happening sexually. How did it feel to him? To her? What did he want her to do next? What did he want to do to her next?

Four stars.

Great beginning of the series. She is being assuring and going slow so he feels comfortable with her touching him and him looking at her.

Nice premise.

Nice back story.

Needed more 'exploration' and foreplay.

Perhaps, "Show me how much you like my breasts."

A proofreader/editor would help. You wrote PEALED when you meant PEELED.

Four stars.

Again a lovely premise.

Great build-up.

But too rushed once they got into/onto bed.

Needed much more touching and feeling of each other.

Needed dialog when he was touching her pussy. Needed to give him instructions how to do play with/finger her pussy. Needed her telling him he could/should kiss her breasts. And how it should be done.

Needed dialog about how wet she was. And why.

Four stars again.