All Comments on 'Me and my Ms.'

A good first attempt, promising storyline, kept me with you, just needed editing for silly spelling mistakes & word confusion.

Good, intense story. However, you're ruining the effect with bad grammar. Please have someone review the story. It's hard to believe you were in 'collage' at all with all the mistakes in there.

Really lovely story/memory, where that feeling from older times is present. I loved the awkwardness, the idea of feeling like a child, not knowing what to do, the silent stares, the newness of it, this all makes it beautifully perfect and adorable. The mis spellings are somewhat disturbing, so proofreading your story would make it even better. I loved it, so 5 stars from me.

Nice start. Looking forward to reading more.

much the same. a very promising start & I look forward to reading more. just work to clean up the grammar

Enjoyed your story, look forward to the continuation with the follow up.