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sexymeupsexymeupover 3 years ago

was a good start but way too short, keep going with it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Absolutely continue the sister In law story.

sp9983sp9983over 3 years ago

A whole lot of nothing. Hopefully you ramp it up in the next part. If not, you'll lose readers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Dejavu

Having read this story, im having a sense of dejavu. Sorry but this looked lifted, read something similar but longer by an established author on this site

cageysea9725cageysea9725over 3 years ago

I disagree with sp9983. The only thing that can be done to keep from losing readers is for the person who posted this to learn how to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Meh

There's more plot in brazzers videos, feels too unnatural

PyronomiconPyronomicon8 days ago

It has some good bones but it needs at least a page more before they just decide to be in love.

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