All Comments on 'Me and Tita's Holiday Ch. 01'

I liked it. As it was your first story, I thought the story line was right to the point. Please continue to write and submit more stories.

The paragraph that starts 'After a few minutes have passed . . . Really needs work.There is a tremendous difficulty getting your penis inside a woman's clitoris; virtually impossible (in reality, not a virtual reality).

A bit confusing to those of us that are English only speaking/reading when you have multiple relatives sharing one reference name.

Your story idea is strong and worth more episodes. Your writing in English requires an editor.