All Comments on 'Me, Mary and the Witch'

The beginning of this story, who is who, relative ages, etc... make no sense.

But the story is good so I gave it a 5

I certainly don't want my story to be confusing! Mary is the 18 year old daughter. Theresa is the mother of Mary, who gave birth at the age of 15 and ran off. The father is 31 years old. Mary and her dad are the main characters. Hope that clears up confusion.

--NaughtyVisions

I got so wet reading this story and had to make myself cum, and it is much shorter than most stories I enjoy. I don't understand how anyone could or would be confused about the characters, because it was very plainly stated.

I have enjoyed all of your stories and left feedback with the suggestion for a disclaimer on the newest hypnosis story. Please keep writing and sharing your stories! Don't worry that this story or the characters are confusing, because it just is not the case. The only people who could possibly be confused are those who lack reading comprehension or those who skim read while looking for the sex parts.

Thank you again, anonymous. You should e-mail me, if your into that. Man or woman, we can have a nice chat, maybe. :)

NaughtyVisions

I love all your stories, and this one was exactly what I needed: short, sexy and cute! 5 stars!

This got me soo hot I came twice reading it! More, More, More!!!

Love this. Exactly the orgasm I needed tonight! And with just the right amount of witchcraft.

My pussy need that. You had me going from start to finish. Just what the doctor ordered. Keep up the good work.

I need more, this was awesome¡ <3

Poor Melody is left waiting.

I smell a threesome😅🤔

Do not include any other women unless you include other men for her. Fair is fair.

[23.10.22]

Short 'n' Zspizee Story!

11/10 Weird Tarot decks!!!!!