All Comments on 'Me Quemo'

Couldn't get through it,you tried too hard, less would have been better.

Couldn't get through it,you tried too hard, less would have been better.

when you wrote this?<BR>

I think I'd like some!

I do believe that it would be beat classified as a erotic prose poem! For many people it will have to many words in it but I thought it terrific.

That was unexpected! Nice story.

There is over acting this is over writing.

Reading in the light. Darkness overcomes me. She moves left. I stagger back. I smell peanuts. Sleep drifts into shadow. WTF?

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Mama was horny, sent kids away for the night, dolled up the bedroom and got laid. Sure took a lot of fancy words to say that.

Neither surprise nor erotica.