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"I love you. More."

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26thNC26thNCalmost 3 years ago

Neither surprise nor erotica.

Sparks373Sparks373about 16 years ago
Big words, short story

Mama was horny, sent kids away for the night, dolled up the bedroom and got laid. Sure took a lot of fancy words to say that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
I Had No Idea Sex Could Be So Boring

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
25

25

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Disjointed. Confusing.

Reading in the light. Darkness overcomes me. She moves left. I stagger back. I smell peanuts. Sleep drifts into shadow. WTF?

edmcpledmcplabout 16 years ago
Too much

There is over acting this is over writing.

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969about 16 years ago
Well

That was unexpected! Nice story.

bruce22bruce22about 16 years ago
Beautifully Written

I do believe that it would be beat classified as a erotic prose poem! For many people it will have to many words in it but I thought it terrific.

GoodWifeyGoodWifeyabout 16 years ago
What were you on

when you wrote this?<BR>

I think I'd like some!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Too much crap

Couldn't get through it,you tried too hard, less would have been better.

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