All Comments on 'Me, Sis and the Hot-tub Ch. 02'

I was enjoying where I thought the story was going, then you introduced Mom. I've got to say, it spoiled the flow for me. It did not feel natural, the interjection of her character destroyed the progression of brother and sisters expanding relationship and it seems she is spoiling what could by a really nice conclusion for the siblings. Just my opinion though.

Goes to show that you don't necessarily have to have your characters fuck their brains out to have a highly erotic story. Great Story!

I was really enjoying the story as it progressed....until you introduced Mom to the mix. I really wish you could have left her at just visiting ,rather than have her get sexual.

A truly beautiful story and in its way ever so much more arousing than the hard-core porn prose that can be found here. Thank you.

Seeing Mom's thick and lush pubic hair spread like a carpet across her groin has made a lasting impression on some guys. It stays as a preference for most.

I'm thoroughly enjoying this story, and the pace of it. Mum is sexy as a sexy thing already, her boobs sound delicious and she's definitely game for whatever happens to happen.

Looking forward to chapter 3.

I was enjoying the story until you had to include Mom. Well I'm disappointed, I feel it should have happened in chapter 3 if at all. I'd have preferred this chapter was just John and Gwen. :*(

Loving how this story is playing out. loads and loads of tease, and tease is good. Looking forward to the next chapter. Also so hoping John eventually busts Gwen's box open. Mom sounds amazing. I think she'd enjoy drinking nut juice directly from the source. It's not technically sex, as a famous president once confirmed.

They all three need to get over their reticence to indulge in intercourse. They'll all be joyously happy to feel the loving closeness of family sex. Also looking forward to sis moving in with her brother and sharing a bed every night.

Didn’t like the involvement of mom nor her story about her sibling, but it was really hot and intense how he came on her.

Overall a great story. I like the dynamics between the siblings. Love how she refers to her being turned on as her box being open

Hope there’s a chapter 3, just the siblings.

Its one of the best stories I have read in a long time and I tell you, I read every night for the past 10 years.

Seriously this was very hot. Hope to read more soon.

This chapter has ended but i hope a new one is coming.

Man, its been nearly six months, youve gotta finish the trilogy!

Priceless!!!