All Comments on 'Mean Girls of Maplewood Ch. 07'

by mondotoken

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shexdensmoreshexdensmoreover 9 years ago
ir was good but......

It was pretty good, but the break in the middle of the anal rape scene was a little turn off. I would have waited to the end or just before Humbert got clipped.

In an odd twist, this could easily become romantic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I agree

The break in the middle of the anal scene was a bad move...

jeouncutjeouncutover 9 years ago
why kill him ?

Well I love ure stories but why did u kill humbert ??

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Why kill him?

It made little sense to kill him off. He just got a better hold of himself and gets hit by a speeding car. Really?!!? Anyway nice story line, I couldn't read the earlier stories with the dudes getting anally raped. 4*s. I would have given it a 5* if you didn't seriously hurt or kill off the kid.

shexdensmoreshexdensmoreover 9 years ago
it was never written that he dies, just gets hit and crumbles over

He doesn't die.

mondotokenmondotokenover 9 years agoAuthor
Trust me

Read the next installment b4 judging this series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Stop reading

the comments and get on with this amazing story already!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Continue

Good story when will chapter 8 be avaliable?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Make next story Fast!!

Please continue this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
ch. 8

Come on put out the next Ch. !!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
hurry up

Hurry up!! Quit making us wait!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
GREAT!

I love this story. I can't wait until the next chapter comes out. I'm looking forward to it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
GREAT!!

I love these stories! please continue this serie for a long time!

mondotokenmondotokenover 9 years agoAuthor
Chapter 8

Chapter 08 was submitted a day ago and rejected due to text spacing. I believe I have corrected the problem.

mondotokenmondotokenover 9 years agoAuthor
Chapter.08

Rejected again, I'm going to rewrite the chapter later tonight and resubmit it as soon as possible.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Looking forward to it...

shexdensmoreshexdensmoreover 9 years ago
AWESOME!

maybe you could put a twist on it. Like he goes into a coma and wakes up to her by his bedside holding his hand with total retrograde amnesia. She then helps nurse him back to health and introduces him as her boyfriend at school. Just for starters, but a member of the squad doesn't like it and trouble ensues. Www

jeouncutjeouncutover 9 years ago
shexdensemore's idea is awsome

I need a good dose of BDSM im a pervert lol

shexdensmoreshexdensmoreover 9 years ago
Thank you jeouncut

Thank you for the complement.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good job I great direction

Like where you are going save the kid

MadJustinMadJustinover 8 years ago

I still want them to get together. If they can get past their mutual baggage I think they could work.

InfiniteXaosInfiniteXaos8 months ago

Well, she deserved that. Also, too bad it was Humbert hit by the vehicle.

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