All Comments on 'Meet & Greet Ch. 01'

Hi Meet & Greet. I think you write with a very free spirit and your effort here is refreshing. I wonder if it might be worth looking at your sentence structure to improve your effort? There are also one or two things, such as repetition, that I would suggest to you.

I gave you three stars but you could so easily make that a five, with a little coaching. Please keep writing - you are very good.

Les.