All Comments on 'Meeting Again Pt. 01'

So far so GREAT!!!

Superb writing. Great story development. How I WISH I could write/weave a story so well.

Another of your fantastic romantic stories.

Scores 5/5

Loved the story! Loved Ed's hairy chest and their love-making. Too bad Ed didn't connect with Edda. But Cathy truly loves him. Let them go again and again. I imagine her breasts scraping softy through his chest hair! What a sight! And what a sexy sensation!

Very well written mate, making me quite excited for whatever comes next. You got yourself a new fan!

Edda clearly loved Ed and he finally admitted he loved her too. Why would she then marry the black guy who was a total asshole?

It's hard to sympathise with Ed when he just lets the love of his life make a huge mistake and marry that douchebag. When Dante got all confrontational, he should have knocked him on his ass... then whisked Edda away. She said herself she would have slept with him in a heartbeat, but he was too spineless to ever make a move on her.

Faint heart never won fair lady...

You actually wrote a story instead of just "wham,bam,thank you ma'am". Great!

...but the Cathy "thinking" bit really doesn't work.

A very well written story, built up slowly, domesticated women not sluts, beautifully structured, sophisticated, good looking, ladies, love your style. waiting for the part II

I enjoyed this story! I was happy to see that it would be the start of a series, I’m curious to see how it will go. My only criticism would be that the writing for Dante is stilted and doesn’t match the writing for the rest of the story.

Looking forward to future adventures. Thanks for sharing.

Very well written! Great story thank you! Can’t wait for pt.2

Well done mate... can't wait for pt2... keep up the good work...

Excellent story. So many possibilities. Please continue~

In the right circumstances relationships like this some time develop.Best line of all "My God Eddie, that's the best my cunt has ever been munched."

This is about as good as it can get. Well done!

And the eventual threesome

Very well written and nicely paced. A superb shared effort.

BRAVO!!

A great start and very yummy too... Thank you!

and am wondering when the 3some with Edda happens