All Comments on 'Meeting Dani Pt. 01'

Thank you I really liked the start of this story . Looking forward to part 2 xx

Great start. I like the way Dani just came right out.

as ms, dawn said

nice start, love to see more

tried to send dawn a message, but wouldn't go thru, would love to hear from you :)

les_carrie@yahoo.com

Magnificent beginning. Very visual and intimate. Reallly enjoy the progress so far and can hardly wait for your next chaper. This is your first here? Well, thanks for joining us because you are a terrific writer.

xoxo,

Di

lovely indeed

I can't wait to read more

cant wait for part 2

Great first part keep them coming

I'm so excited for part 2. Cannot wait

what a beautiful delicious sexy tale

thank you so so much

ginger

Loved part one.... Cannot wait for part two! Si wish u was Dani's boyfriend!

Davina x

Loved part obey. Hope to read a lot more! Wish I was with Dani x

thank you for your story. it was really hot!

one question, minor thing: isn't Devin a unisex name? Would they really need to come up with an alternate name?

But overall i like it a lot. i like how you go into them being friendly and i like their dialog. its hot but you don't just jump into sex, they're new at this and taking their time.

thanks for writing and sharing with us!

PLEASE write more of this. You have real talent. That was VERY hot.

Love the story so far. Please keep writing! You're good!

Wonderful story. You are actually really good.

Great start

If only I had found a friend like Dani instead of having to dress in secret. A good start and I hope you will continue with more. It gives me hope that there is someone out there waiting to encourage me to become the girl I always long to be.

I really liked the way they became friends first while getting into the fun, cute sex. A really nice start.