All Comments on 'Meeting in the Park'

Warn your readers if its a gay/lesbian romance or port it where it belongs! 1* for posting here without warning us.

Wasn't aware there was such a rule in this category.

No apologies needed, very nice story.

I would like to see another chapter

I found it to be an excellent romance which was written with a lot of understanding and feeling.

I have to say that I found the previous comment rather offensive especially considering that recently quite a few stories entered as 'erotic coupling' should be actually entered as BDSM.

Romance as I understand it, has no set gender or exclusions.

Before anyone complains, this comment is written in Australian English.

Because it's in the WRONG category. There IS a lesbian section for these stories.

No, the story not Lesbian Sex. It's a romance, there is no explicit sex in it.

You write with so many feelings I could not even think of. Keep up the good work, I'll read all your further stories. Ps.: Do you have other stories written down but not uploaded? I would really love to read them if there is any.

For the read.

Kind of wished there was more....

Liked your story - hope you continue, looking forward to seeing what kind of a peeve she is! I do like some kink!

A very skilfully written story and and a tasteful one at that. The small amount of gentle erotica at the end was exactly right. Sometimes it's best to leave something to the reader's imagination; as they say in showbiz, "Always leave them wanting more."

...a story about two girls having a romantic meet and greet and the little mousie is peeved that the character's gender preference as chosen by the author was not pre-announced.

Even though it is clearly mentioned in the 'Tags for this Story'. That mind-boggling word 'Lesbian', three times.

Poor little suffering mousie so terribly abused by their own inability to understand what they are reading.

It is a shame that all that taxpayer money was wasted on trying to get that particular commentator through years of Remedial Reading Comprehension classes.

I loved it!

I dont favorite often. You are absolutely the best.

This is a great story!!