by Emmie8111
Excellent. Was sorry to see it end. But as with every story that grips a person, you left me wanting more
Bravo. The characters are wonderful and you developed them beautifully.
Please continue this story. This is a real budding romance and I want to read more of it.
Not enough attribution on the dialog. I couldn't figure out who's talking in that conversation that began with, "What are you thinking?" until "I did laugh, he joined me." If you simply said, "What are you thinking?" I asked, then the rest would have been obvious.
I would love to read more about Ray and Aurora. This was an excellent read!