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All Comments on 'Meeting in the Park'

by Emmie8111

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
More please

I would love to read more about Ray and Aurora. This was an excellent read!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
More more more

Please continue on! I want to know what happens!

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xalmost 7 years ago
Not Bad

Not enough attribution on the dialog. I couldn't figure out who's talking in that conversation that began with, "What are you thinking?" until "I did laugh, he joined me." If you simply said, "What are you thinking?" I asked, then the rest would have been obvious.

clearedtofuckclearedtofuckalmost 7 years ago
Excellent

Please continue this story. This is a real budding romance and I want to read more of it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Excellent character development

Bravo. The characters are wonderful and you developed them beautifully.

mrbbw69mrbbw69almost 7 years ago
Loved it

Excellent. Was sorry to see it end. But as with every story that grips a person, you left me wanting more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Please continue!!

_Bookkeeper__Bookkeeper_almost 6 years ago
Very nice

I enjoyed reading this.

Anton79Anton793 months ago

You have a great attention for detail!

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