by icanmakeuthrob
I am liking these Jenny stories. My only criticism is the Chapters are a little too short. I When I first started writing mine were short as well and it ends up losing the audience if it is a multi part story. Now if it was one and done then that is a different matter. Anyway you should work on making the content longer but not too long like I have done with a few of my stories. Try to find the right amount of story mixed with a healthy dose of coitus. But keep at it you will improve as time goes on. I look foward to reading future stories from you.