All Comments on 'Meeting My College Roommate'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
great beginning

I hope that Dad gets involved but also they go on to greater things at uni ,I loved the beginning . I just wish that I was going to room next to them

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Awsome

Whats next

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hot and Heartfelt

What a hot story and romantic too. I loved the interaction between these two young men--erotic and heartfelt. My only criticism is the grammar. The changes between present and past tense disrupted the otherwise smooth flow of the story. But I'm really looking forward to your next story. Keep up the good work!

Reggie2xxReggie2xxover 3 years ago

I loved it was so good nicely written and maybe a chapter 2 coming up to see if the father gets involved.

dodgeboy2dodgeboy2over 3 years ago
Very hot

The story itself was very hot, grammar aside. How anyone could read this with needing to relieve themselves is beyond me, I know I couldn't.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Sexy pair

What an interesting idea -- invite your pre-chosen roommate over to get acquainted! I am surprised that the sexy, mature, muscular football star Tyson doesn't have a smattering of chest hair across his muscular manly chest. A bit of hair covering the middle chest and his pecs, maybe a light treasure trail. They will have a very interesting freshman year!

AlexpaulAlexpaulover 3 years ago

Do we get a chapter 2?

I’m hard here.

theMasterBaitertheMasterBaiterover 3 years ago
I'm with Alex

Got me hard but I need a second chapter to cum.

Trav2BDCTrav2BDCover 3 years ago
I want more

I want more. I want to see how things develop in college. And the day after.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Sweet!

It’s quite interesting that Tyson’s the bottom when he’s the one who invited him over. But it would be wonderful to see how the relationship advances.

nyteramblernyteramblerover 1 year ago

Yes for Shure needs another chapter or 2. One needs to expliand why Tyler made choice's he made and one about collage days.

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