by naughtygaywriter
I hope that Dad gets involved but also they go on to greater things at uni ,I loved the beginning . I just wish that I was going to room next to them
What a hot story and romantic too. I loved the interaction between these two young men--erotic and heartfelt. My only criticism is the grammar. The changes between present and past tense disrupted the otherwise smooth flow of the story. But I'm really looking forward to your next story. Keep up the good work!
I loved it was so good nicely written and maybe a chapter 2 coming up to see if the father gets involved.
The story itself was very hot, grammar aside. How anyone could read this with needing to relieve themselves is beyond me, I know I couldn't.
What an interesting idea -- invite your pre-chosen roommate over to get acquainted! I am surprised that the sexy, mature, muscular football star Tyson doesn't have a smattering of chest hair across his muscular manly chest. A bit of hair covering the middle chest and his pecs, maybe a light treasure trail. They will have a very interesting freshman year!
I want more. I want to see how things develop in college. And the day after.
Sweet!
It’s quite interesting that Tyson’s the bottom when he’s the one who invited him over. But it would be wonderful to see how the relationship advances.
Yes for Shure needs another chapter or 2. One needs to expliand why Tyler made choice's he made and one about collage days.