All Comments on 'Meeting 'Sharedhousewife''

More soon I hope. She is one lucky lady! Gave you a 5

Gave you a5 to help with your score. I love LW stories and how they piss off dear annony the asshole of Lit!

First, it was a good story and pretty well written. But sometimes writers get into habits they don't even know. Yours is the use of proper nouns whenever you're talking about your characters. Learn to use pronouns, and put them in places other than near or at the beginning of sentences. The story becomes more like a tale being told than an erector set manual on how to build a...

If you met sharedwhorewife, you met a real pig in lipstick.