All Comments on 'Meeting the Boss's Daughter Ch. 19'

There was about 3 lines of story... it now is becoming an exercise in writing a sex scene with nothing more. And very very short. Almost tossed together as if the author has lost interest. How about a long chapter with a conclusion if you cannot stay interested. I do apologize for being harsh but I thought originally this was a good story until you got her hooked up with the antagonist with no escape.

In this chapter the author seems to have missed some of the details. For instance, as the elevator doors open and there stands Katie, but they immediately start kissing. You would think they are still in the elevator until the comment about the excerise ball. In the past the chapters seem to have more thought and direction than just wham, bam and bye. Not sure in what direction the author is trying to lead the readers. Where is the plot and direction?