by Adrian69702006
That was it? No wonder I stick with a select group of tried and true authors.
you're correct, OldStormy, and the story ends here. In view of the fact that our esteemed wordsmith endeavoured to subsume his elaborations under 'Novels & Novellas', I suspect - or rather, fear - however, that his intentions are rather long-termed ones.
Why bother submitting a story of this length? It says nothing
Reasonably well written. The writing indicates that there will be a continuation of the story in many more chapters.
First of al, Alberta Al. Many thanks for your kind words. Although it can be read as a standalone, this story will have a sequel and in fact it is part of a much larger series as a perusal of my submissions should make clear. It is itself a sequel to another story - "Dirty Country Girl" - and is set around the same time as "Tuesday's Tutorial." I hope that clarifies things for Old Stormy too.
Anonymous - I can't respond to what you've said, nor would I wish to as it doesn't deserve a reply.
bigguy323 and IMcRout. I'm delighted to receive constructive comment and criticism from competent authors who can write at least as well as I can, indeed preferably better. However I've checked both your profiles and, at the present time, neither of you have any submissions of your own here on Literotica. If you're capable of producing material that's good enough for inclusion here, you obviously haven't been moved to submit it. That fact alone disqualifies you from disparaging my work as I have know way of knowing whether or not you're competent writers. In the absence of evidence that you can do better I have no choice but to draw my own conclusions.
Rather amusing and and well written. One looks forward to the next chapter. Those that belittle it are probably American and fail to understand British humour and the class system.
Does this really need to be in Literotica. Crap, all about a non-existent Upper Class with outdated views of life etc. Waste of time reading this. At least he could have fucked the old lady!!
In India we have an expression - "KLPD". Some of our Indian readers would understand!
Quite funny in it own right. Please continue, as I am looking forward to the responses of his family to this turn of events.
The important thing is to remember that this is set thirty years ago and a lot of things have changed since then. I am eager to see the rest of the novella!
funny , amusing, interesting, wonderful.
Loved it. not quite been there myself, but I genuinley have been close, even if it was a few years ago.
No need to follow this one up, because i understand that's it. But let's have more of the same. Damn it --- I'm going to favourite you.
Thanks mate!
Many thanks for your kind and constructive comments, Bruce22 and Britease. Glad you enjoyed it. It's certainly my intention to write a sequeI and others are planned too. I expect that in all fairness an American reader might not necessarily understand the English class system and I think it's important to remember that the events described took place 28 years ago which is a lifetime ago for some people. Brian and Anne are now a middle aged married couple themselves. Is it a happy marriage though? Some future stories may reveal that beneath the surface all is not quite what it seems.
Well written and interesting. As a novella it did well as a first chapter. The title was misleading and I appreciated finding out that there was no non-human dragon early in the story.
Given the shortness of this chapter I wonder how many it will take to tell the story.