All Comments on 'Meeting Violet'

by Jay Richards

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Good start - please continue

Good start- story has lots of potential- please continue.

0ra11yfix8ed0ra11yfix8edalmost 8 years ago
Very nicely done!

Deserves more attention but the audience (for cfnm) is limited and not very expressive! Well written, well edited except for one word... shunned? Who wouldn't want to meet Violet? Thanks for an inspirational read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is just wonderful. It is super hot and very realistic. It captures the nervousness of such a situation so well, which addds to the hotness. I'd love to read your take on how the night would have progressed.

Thank you for sharing.

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