All Comments on 'Megan & Bill'

This whore was seriously whining that she can't take her own medicine??!! What a fool this man is to try and build a life with someone else's usdd up damages whore

This was a great story about the consequences of cheating. Megan tried to further her husband’s career and with the help of alcohol and drugs, she lost her way and turned into a slut and a whore. Bill had a good plan to get even with Greg for changing his wife. He got the full support of his firm and Greg was fired. Later, Greg killed himself although the suicide may have been a murder that was never proved. Bill became full partner at the firm. Jan was promoted to Bill’s old job. Megan stayed faithful to Bill and slowly Bill’s trust in Megan grew. This was a great story about how one couple recovered from the wife becoming a slut and a whore for the company. It is how it can happen but most times a marriage this impacted will end in divorce. Great story. Many twists and turns. Five stars for sure.

Truly a total piece of RAAC crap!! Still don’t know why I wasted my time actually reading it except that I kept hoping that it would improve!!!

Miserable little fuk, simping 101. He had to bow down in the end. FugDat.

Not just a stupid story but a story about a stupid & wimpy MC!!! He didn’t have to stay and watch wifey get used but he did and then, the next day, he is handed the power to wipe the asshole out but has to be persuaded!! How dumb is that?? He is all scared about going to see the president…. WHY? He has his fellow employees behind him as well as video proof what is there to fear??

On top of that why weren’t at least some of the employees filing charges long before this??

Sometimes, even when writing fiction, it is a good idea to stick a little closer to actual reality!!

Stupid stupid story. Just ugh.

Don't know what that was, but it was not erotic. Demented.

Started out with a. Completely farfetched plot, but its your story and fantasy so ok. Thing go totally off the rails and into utterly ridiculous in the office before leaving for Jamaica and turning it into a complete train wreck.

The build up to the how and why Megan cheated on Bill was so poorly done that it was impossible to sympathise and believe in the character as someone that's capable of loving someone.

Far too much of her getting into and enjoying it and vocally disrespecting Bill and far too little coercion and zero contrition at the essential points.

In short, it's just impossible to forgive Megan and any future relationship with her would be pure insanity.

complete and utter garbage -1000

Surprise, surprise — a RAAC.

There is no reason for anything after the first page. Quit the job, dump the wife, and move on.

It seemed mainly to be word salad. It didn’t make a lot of sense, logically, and I thought the character’s behaviors and choices were fairly nonsensical. It’s also difficult to take seriously the idea that a mid-level manager could secretly set himself up as a sexual despot and have multiple women serve him and others for years without consequences.

It could only happen with aliens on another planet.

I would have liked some serious payback on Greg

Absolute crap.

BS!!!! A waste of time.

Not sure I agree with the resolution of the story, too much forgive and forget, not enough fire and brimstone given the nature of the crime, but still an enjoyable read. Very well written and obviously well planned out. Kudos Author

Long stroke story. Could have been a decent story.

Did I agree with the MC's decisions? No. But damned fine writing anyway.

Hmmmm, I can see what you were trying to do. However, I think the story moved too fast with so many points to cover. Very, very broken people but I must admit I felt for each. Well except Greg. Needed a dark alley scene for him in the end.

Thank u for the effort of writing this, even though it wasn’t my cup of tea

The story is for people with humiliation fetish. Both being humiliated (first half) and humiliating others (second half).

What a Croc!

wtf is this shit.. impossible for you to actually write a strong male character.. do the world a favor throw out your key board.. this was complete udder shit

What rubbish, it might have taken drugs and alcohol at first but she kept on doing it.

So after finding out she’s the company whore, watching her live performance as well as recordings of her escapades it takes seven pages before he admits to himself that he might be losing respect for her. REALLY?

Adding insult to injury they live happily ever after lol.

But hey guys it’s only a story, I mean it’s a monumentally crap story but you know what they say one man’s fantasy is another man’s total bollocks.

If he truly wanted her back he should have divorced her and then remarried her. A new beginning. Me, one and done. I would not be able to live with someone that has done so much harm to themselves or to a marriage. Especially when so many had been 'with' her. Yuk! Bathing in bleach could not get that filth off a person.

pretty fucking wimpy and unbelievable. who in their right mind would take that cunt back?? 1*

This is one of the most ridiculous stories on literotica, absolute garbage⭐️

That was so stupid on so many levels.

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Wow, to call Bill a pussy is insulting to pussies. I am also sick of this love conquers all bullshit. Real life just doesn't work that way. He should have tossed her to the curb and lived his best life

About a true wimp of a husband, Greg should been beat to pulp the husband in this story wimp for not beating the bastard when he had the chance.

C2c, your not a man are you? If you are a woman as I begin to suspect after reading a couple of your stories,I suggest you move from wherever you live and move to where you can finally meet real true life men and get one in your life so you realise and appreciate what men truely are made of and you may be missing. Men are certainly Not like the ones currently you must be associating with that are setting a really bad example for you. I may be out to lunch on that,but for the life of me I simply can see no other reason your male characters in your stories consistently fall short of being men. Not talking neanderthals, but real everyday men/husbands. Do that and maybe your stories will be worth reading as you perspective will change,about women as well, for that matter. Having expressed my thoughts,now my opinion: you have the ability to write well,but your stories are simply too far fetched to be believable,hence you ruin your effort and the readers ability to enjoy it..

How many men would take that skanky bitch back - there's not that much love in the world. 1*

Wow…this was disgusting on so many levels that I really ahve to wonder what sort of mental

issues Curious 2c suffers from?? The justifications given, the actions of all the protagonists and antagonists and the fact that the punishment meted to the perpetrators of the rapes was so pisspoor that it left a sour taste in the mouth even in the ending!!

Again, reading this makes me wonder why I have this author as a favorite.

No way, worst story I have ever read. No man would ever take that cunt back. C2C, is this really how you see things. If so you are not a man.

The plot of this story, while not imaginative, was not bad, the story itself was not great. Question is "Why?" There was plenty of angst and drama. Though, I thought that Bill did not get enough satisfaction on Greg. What really had a negative effect on he story was excessive number of sex scenes. Yes, I realize that this is Literotica.com, so sex scenes are the norm. But, the number and length of those scenes detracted from Megan and Bill's story.

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Pasqual

What a huge piece of shit. This writer is a total moron with no talent whatsoever. 0

Words fail me trying to describe how bad this dung is.

I guess I will say this about the story, if you can't say anything nice then don't say anything at all. So there you have it folks, I say no comment!!!

Why would anyone spend part of their life writing this?

1 star - really fracked up story - only read the first and last page.

I should have just read the comments.

I just don't understand the appeal of this sort of thing.

By far your worst story. This just doesn't hang together or make sense. She was drugged and blackmailed but then continued even when her husband found out and then had to watch her. After all this they stayed together? No way - makes absolutely no sense.

I disagree wit some of the other posters here .. Megan was Given a Date Rape drug and told stories She believed due to the Drugs .. ; I hope that the rest of the guys commit suicide also . Remember that Alberts wife killed herself due to the drugs she had been given .. Megan was not right in the head due to the drugs and the Brainwashing she had went through . But in the end She did hang up on Greg so give the lady some points

This was nothing but GARBAGE. Gave it a ONE STAR rating.

Sorry to say this is the worst of your stories I’ve read.

Bill was a huge wimp. Sounds like Greg met his end at Albert's hands. At least that was good. Megan had to have been swimming with STDs. Yet Bill has sex with her that first night after she returned. So Many sick characters.

I was getting tired of the guy wanting to save his marriage after the humiliation and knowledge of what his wife was doing ... then he admits and erection watching and I stopped reading.

In the real world, the guy walks out of the room and leaves the party when his boss reveals what the wife has been doing. End of story.

How do you not have STD tests, before he touches his wife again? In fact he should have gotten then from his harem too. No intelligence displayed in this story, not by anyone.

minus 5 stars.. what drivel... waste of time..

Megan should make Bill eat her lover's cum from her snatch to be even.

This fucking shit is so stupid. Using my state as an example, this company is on the hook for at least criminal violations and five civil violations. Add the Federal workplace safety and workplace sexual harassment law violations, and this cuckolded dude just needs to write down a high, double-digit prime number and starting adding zeroes behind it. Seriously, this is so willful and egregious that company officials and several of the principals involved would GO TO JAIL. This needs to be in the Fantasy/Sci-Fi category.

more stupidity, try not to 'take' anything when you write, your stories will be so much better.

Why do all your stories have the wifes turning into sluts or whores, then you have the husband take them back? That is not the way of the world. If my wife did to me what Megan and Greg did to Bill, they would still be searching for the bodies.

Sorry C2C: this was too hard to believe.

This ended as I stopped reading the drivel at the end of page 1. Signed: BTW

Was this wrote by a 12 year old?

Literally

It’s sad to say but you seem incapable of writing believable characters and if the reader can’t believe in those characters, no matter how many pages you write it’s all just drivel.

Here’s a tip how to whittle seven pages down to one, once the boss starts pawing the wife and she’s loving it MC gets up says ‘I resign’ walks out sees a divorce lawyer in the morning and a little while later he’s free of the slut. Now isn’t that much more satisfying?

The reader has only wasted a half hour on a frankly more realistic story.

The coworkers should have been fired. It’s also hard to imagine Bill staying with the firm, even as a partner, with many other people knowing what he went through, before he knew he was going through it.

I read your story and as expected I got VERY angry and really into the story. Somewhere along the way YOU got lost. I felt like you had betrayed ME. Yes there was the redemption where they got back together and had nearly world 98% worked out their problems BUT Greg was not punished, nor were the Co-Workers nor were the Clients. I was an Upper level manager who had to deal with situations similar but no where as bad as you have written. The Firms who employed the assholes that "fucked over" his wife would have been informed by my firm if not the Police of the Criminal Behavior of their company representatives and many, MANY LAWSUITS would have resulted. RAPE, Accesory to RAPE and at least a dozen other charges would be on the table.

To get back to your writing...You left me feeling Unfulfilled, Angry, and Pissed off that you left the story half UNWRITTEN and INCOMPLETE. THIS could have been such a GREAT STORY but it left me gutted and Pissed at you as the story teller. You HAVE the skills, you CAN MOVE people's emotions but it felt like all foreplay and no climax.

I got NO satisfaction.

There are a lot of stories on Literotica about guys like Greg. People who take advantage of their position to seduce the wives of underlings. I have always held a dark cold place in my soul for people like that. In this case it is rape pure and simple. An emotional story that turns out well. A 5 Star Rating.

She was Raped plain and simple ..If She had been My Wife I would have taken her Back .. But We would both be going to Counseling .. I would have made sure that everyone who Touched her Paid for it .. I mean they were on Tape , So I would have found them . Plus I would have made Sure that the wife got 5 million for pain and suffering ..

I normally try and leave positive comments but no. The man has been betrayed, his wife on film, she has been out overnight being used by multiple men, dropped off naked in the front yard, and he is thinking ... If you want to stay married to me there is going to be a huge change right away. Stay married to the slut that has been willingly used, and even in front of him .... nope.

If this story weren’t so dumb it would be offensive

She says he went too far. I disagree 100%. She had well over a year of cheating with so many men no one could really count. She had multiple partners, single partners, she was doing it in front of him, rubbing his face in it, and so on. He has 4 women once or twice a week for a few months. He didn't humiliate her as much as she did him. Two wrongs do not make a right but no way did he go too far.

I think once Jab said it was enough it would have been perfect if he pulled out the divorce papers and said "you have been served".

I do like most of curious’ stories, and can suspend disbelief for the other stories, but this is a bridge too far. The only way reconciliation would work is after a divorce and several years apart

You are the WORST TERRIBLE AWFUL PITIFUL BAD author on Literotica, period!

What a waste of time, why does every cheating wife pull gangbangs and trains? Just totally unbelievable bullshit⭐️

This is really good.

What a deplorable story!

Revenge involves burning both bitch and bastard.

To much of this crap on here these days, too many wimps who enjoy being humiliated. Too much forgiveness.

Strike back and make them suffer, that's revenge!

Stupidly implausible RAAC

Yes I am. I must be because I keep coming back to this story. Not because I like RAAC stories (usually dislike), but because it’s such a “strokeable” story.

Fuck! I’m sick! Help me!!!

5-stars

Black mail by a Boss is nothing new. Before the Unions. There were predators among not only lower and middle management but also by higher management as well. With the Union Contracts. Unless the woman was willing in the first place. It stopped happening.

Good fantasy story - it would never happen in life. I would have liked to see more about the punishment for Greg and his associates. 4 stars

Just too much cheating to make even a RAAC possible. Truly bad story and epic waste of time.

Allowing creative latitude for much of the story, some of the closing details don’t make sense. How is it Greg didn’t serve time for criminal offenses? Then there are the other men who Greg pulled-in: those men willingly used women, knowing it was wrong. Why weren’t they immediately fired? As for the customers... execs should have been tipped off that their buyers were corrupt - it’s the best shot at not losing customers.

The slut of a wife fucked dozens of men and had gang bangs, while her husband only had sex with a handful of other women, and somehow that made him the unfeeling jerk causing pain to his wife?

The RAAC was too un-fucking-believable

Really saved myself a lot of time and aggravation. Keep this whore? No man with real testosterone in his system does that. Especially after getting a fucking harem to service him like a maharajah. Why in the world would he want a sloppy pussy and ass that just reminds him of all the guys who'd shot their wads into the skank. Please consider the fact that reality can be very entertaining.

This has to be one of THE WORST stories on this site! ...So bad I had to skip read it!

Were you on something when you wrote this shit????

Your people keep saying the same things over and over throughout the story. Normally when characters do that something new is revealed but they don't. You could have easily made this a 4-page story rather than an overly long 7.

Granted, you are allowed to live your life however you want, but from reading many of your stories it seems you are content with being a wimpy cuckold. Even when revenge is given, it is very passive and extremely unrewarding. It is one thing if a man wants to be a Cuckold, but another when he is so beaten and degraded he no longer is a "Man". Just the shell of a man.

The main character should have sued the shit out of the company or required them to pay him millions to keep his job. Instead, he got a measly $50k and a free vacation? LOL.

Then he takes the slut back? If that had been me, I would have removed the Cocks of ALL the men that had sex with her and I would have cut her Clit so she could never enjoy sex again. It would have been in the form of what Muslim's do to their women, a female Circumcision. Then I would have walked away from all of them and "washed my hands" of the whole situation.

Bad...really bad...laughably bad. And totally unbelievable. -JRZ

Why do so many men writing on this site think women gave no brain.For christ sake I've never come across a women like that nor do I ever want too.

What a complete waste of time.

Far too long for a kiss and make up story and despite the offer of a partnership there is no mention that he took it till the end,no mention of the three weeks leave he was told to take.Finally all the goings on listed would never have lasted that long some one would have blown the whistle earlier?

To find commenters read through 7 pages and the shoot down the whole story is always entertaining.

I got sick as soon as he asked forgave her and told her that she can come back home. Seriously, I wouldn’t wish this kind of love or relationship to my worst enemy. His wife has disrespected him for 18 months by allowing everyone that works with her husband to fuck her or know that she’s the company’s slut. That alone should be enough reason to never stay with her.

It was a business deal to the board of directors they wanted him a partner because it was cheaper they know that they have fucked up and if he sued them they’ll pay much more. The whole company were either fucking her and knowing about the drugs, or knowing that others were fucking her after getting her drugged. And there wasn’t any system in place that allowed them to tell management about the activities that were going on. Or the partners already knew.

I glaced and saw a few other female names in the last page, I mentioned earlier that I stopped reading when her told her to come back home. To me having other girls in his bed doesn’t change anything. How doesn’t that even mend his heart? Guess what, he can start by kicking the slut out of his life!

Yet another case of the comments generated by a bad story being way more entertaining then the story itself!

To all you left their justifiable rage here, after wasting their time giving this sad-ass tale a try: bravo. You've made all of us LIT readers proud.

I disagree with many of the BTB stories where they try to destroy a wife that they supposedly loved for 10 or 25 years and she cheats over the last few months and she is supposed to be completely destroyed. I have no problem with the husband divorcing and leaving the cheater, just the idea of revenge on someone that is potrayed as a loving wife and mother for decades then she cheats and besides divorce there needs to be some kind of revenge. You walk away with dignity and grace she will much more regret what she has done for the rest of her life than you taking revenge on her where she will lose her love and respect for you. Taking revenge you will make it easier on her, not harder, in the long run.

However, in this case while I don't think Megan should have been destroyed, sometimes too much happens that you cannot be with someone else. Fine if she was drugged, but she went back to Greg every time knowing what will happen when she wasn't drugged. I could understand her getting off on it, it's a hormonal reaction. Shit, I have had great sex with women I didn't even like outside the bedroom. My cock liked them enough though. She loved the sex, her submissive side responded, etc, etc. Honestly, I could even see Bill do his best to support and rescue her from Greg. To be there for her till she found her equilibrium and be her friend. Ten years of love and marriage justify that. But to stay married to Megan after she disrespected him like that for 18 months, not only with the sex, but doing it with people who see him everyday and verbally disrespecting him. No matter what it will end up being a tarnished relationship. Be kind to her and even forgive her so that both of you can move on in peace, but move on. There are plenty of women out there. In fact, half the population :). Sometimes it's just as simple as too much water under the bridge, and in this case there was a historic flood and tsunami combined.

stupid story

1 starr

Never want to read a single story from you ever again. I read the 1st and last page. Not reading 7 pages of this crap.

Asinine!

By far, one of your most ridiculous and stupid attempts at writing.

A real MAN would have at least eaten the cum out his wife's snatch. Only 4 stars fro the main character being so close-minded.

This story is terrible! I'm not going to waste too much time by going into it too much. But the author cannot be so stupid as to write this crap and not have us believe he is on crack! Just a few little stupid things in this story...Greg was pulling this shit for years and years and it was in the same office as the president and the whole board....and no one ever said anything to any of them ever?...c'mon were not stupid. Also for 18 months his wife is fucking the world and all of the husband's "great" team at work that looked up to him never ever said a word to him....c'mon were not stupid. Then you bring out that tired old adage about his working so much it just caused her to be lonely and horny and well it was her husband's fault that she had to fuck everyone in sight or outta sight! C'mon you are stupid! I won't even get into the other five whore's idea .....of getting him sorted out and on the right track of forgiving his wife! C'mon stupid ....do you see what I'm getting at...this story is shit and you should have given your head a shake before trying to write it!

Cuck faggy shit enjoy eating cum the rest of your life cuck boy

This should be in another category: "The Thoughts of a Demented Writer." Truthfully, curious2c, you should get some professional help.

After everything that Megan and Greg did to belittle, disrespect and cuckold Bill, Bill got down on his knees and begged Megan to come back home with him. And Megan forgave Bill? Bill will be castrated within 6 months or at least in a chastity cage. One star...and even that is a gift.