All Comments on 'Megan & David Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great!!

I really enjoyed your story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
great story

hot story but keep that lesbian bitch aunt off it

zombie22zombie22over 19 years ago
pretty good

Good start. Very good description.

don87654don87654over 19 years ago
Needs a few more chapters

Started off bad, with that queer stuff. Ending more than made up for it. Need more....

tinman69stinman69sover 19 years ago
A Trully great story!

I thought this was a really great story! And the beginning was a good distraction to the the ending. And every good story has to have a distraction of one sort or another, so enter Aunt Bea. I too, would like to run her over with a bus, but she definately had a place in this story. You did a great job! Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Simply Amazing

I like it, it's the first story I've read in a long time that had an antagonist as real and evil as Aunt Bea. I hated her, but that conflict made the story seem as real as reality itself. A billion thumbs up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
sick

nothing but a sick gay story and totaly unrealistic no real guy that was told to suck a cock or the guy would go find his sister and fuck her would suck it he would wait until it was out then grab it and twist then when the guy doubled over punch him out keep it out of the fantacy and twilight zone areas

sp9983sp9983about 3 years ago

It just made no sense at all.

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