All Comments on 'Megan and Kyle Pt. 01'

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DunkirkDunkirkover 3 years ago

We need to know what happens next. Megan needs to be more than a personal assistant

mfan2112mfan2112over 3 years agoAuthor

More parts are in the queue for the admins to approve

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wonderful!

Especially for your first story! Having an editor would help, but sweet and sexy nonetheless. My cock is so hard right now! I'm wishing I was Kyle, with Megan next to me, getting ready for part 2 of the story....

rightbankrightbankover 3 years ago
a short but interesting beginning

I hope we learn more about them soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Please get an editor.

And please, please stick with either current tense or, more preferably, past tense. Jumping back and forth between the two is very, very distracting.

mfan2112mfan2112over 3 years agoAuthor

It has been pointed out by a few readers that I have significant issues changing tenses in my works. I am starting a process of looking for a new editor who can help me address this issue. As I can, I will be correcting and updating my works. This is a slow process so please bear with me. Thank you all for your understanding.

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