All Comments on 'Melancholia in Pictures'

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ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 4 years ago
Very dark and deep

Hard to end the thought

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

??????

Quickly apparent that girl is not husband's. But I don't follow much after that . War? What happened?? No comments to get to the story

ForensicFossilForensicFossilabout 1 year ago

I do not understand this at all, other than the girl was not sired by the husband. Any help?

chytownchytown2 months ago

***What was that?

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Long-time writer of computer software, technical documents, papers and more boring stuff. Long-time pretend writer of fiction, erotic and other, but never put these latter 'out there.' It's time. Many of my stories take place in what I call "Mel's Universe," after the female l...