All Comments on 'Melanie & Her Coach Ch. 03'

Whuuut?

This needs a sound track. I'm thinking the music they played during the silent films where the evil guy twirled his long mustache and tied the helpless young thing to the railroad tracks.

That completely ruined it. Giggled and I couldn't finish reading the story.

A fun, hot read. I could have done without the multiple poop chute references, especially right as he cums... how corny. Unless you were actually trying to be funny. In that case, I'd have a good laugh if a guy said that to me. I Hope you continue with this story line.

Please oh PLEASE some more!! this was soo hot, got me hot then got me off, thank you so much for your creative writing!!

So where is that other encounter in which she gets breed?

Please keep going. I want to read more and find out what happens

begging for a sequel

I liked this story, hot. Thanks for not beating around the bush. I like that you developed what was happening right away. Nice.