All Comments on 'Melanie and Kaylee'

Way to come back in style

Mmmm.

Oh hell yeah, please continue.

You NEED to do a follow up to this!! This is a great story in the making. Don’t end it here.

As good as any story that i've read for a long time .Please follow on soon.

Very nice return. I follow several writers on this site, some of whom have not been active for some time now, but I hold out hope — glad to see you back to writing/contributing. Interesting how you brought the two protagonists together sexually. Sensual, drawn out love making, but where to now (?). Could end now in a satisfying way leaving more to our imagination, which would fine as long as you continue to share other stories. Or maybe this budding romance moves on with fits and starts/ups and downs.

It’s very inadvertently romantic. I get the feeling that these two have somehow stumbled upon a long term love.

So glad yo came back....and what a nice read too.

beautiful story, wonderful style - please go on, let us share "the morning after"

Cute, sweet, touching. The writing style is rather simple but that helps to create an atmosphere of pure, innocent discovery (as opposed to sophisticated character development)

This was amazing! You are a great writer. Love this story. Can you do a chapter on just one of the girls seducing the supervisor too please.

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Well obviously this need to continue. There is the potential for major drama if the two ladies openly become an item, and creepy John and chauvinistic Mike decide that they have been rejected, causing them to behave like wounded animals. This story could definitely become more than just the exceptional piece of erotica that it already is. Encore!!! Encore!!!

Whoah! One of the best for a very long time 😊

Very nice story and will be waiting for the next episode to come…

More! Definitely more! Your story flowed so well, we're definitely hungry for more of these two lovely characters. Looking forward to whatever journey they take, so take whatever time u need. Not too much though ;) .

Great story! Love the romance + respect yet seduction + sexiness between the women