All Comments on 'Melanie Jackson on the Side 01'

I didn't finish the story. I figured if you couldn't make up your mind if she was 40 or 61 why should I continue?

First paragraph was awful, didn't read further

For those who didn't read the story you missed the point.

This is a lively humorous take on many storyies seen here and had me giggling plenty because I've experienced these things many times.

Dear author, to you know hot to turn a humorous 2* into a shit-eating grin 5*?

Lose the last line:

End Melanie Jackson on the side 01

We know the story has ended for the moment. Don't insult us using this third grade conclusion.