All Comments on 'Melanie: The Caretaker'

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monique1971monique1971over 17 years ago
very nice!

You set the scene well and got me very wet....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This has to be a copy n paste mashup, because anyone whom was genuinely interested in writing wouldn't fuck up 1st/2nd/3rd person singular

Helen1899Helen18995 months ago

Fuck the mistakes, it was hot, loved it I masturbated and came with them thank you author 5*

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