All Comments on 'Melanie's Seduction Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great story

Awesome! Michael now needs training on getting excited about Melanie having a black baby.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great story!

Are you going to continue?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great story

Looking forward to the next chapters.

TJB76TJB76almost 7 years ago
Great story!

Don't give up!

jones286jones286over 6 years agoAuthor
Next chapter

After a long delay I aim to post another chapter next week. This story has elements of being autobiographical

tt16tt16over 6 years ago
Great news!

Liked this story a lot! Hope to see a lot more from you!

jones286jones286over 6 years agoAuthor
thanks tt16

See if you like the earlier chapters, I have chapter 4 just about ready after super long delay!

tt16tt16over 6 years ago
That is great!

How is it going? I am checking for updates from time to time:) Hope it is not going to be the last chapter! I like gradual development of the story.

jones286jones286over 6 years agoAuthor

Ch 4 ," Bringing racial acceptance into the home" is submitted and waiting for approval, before Literotica publish. Its not the last story, I anticipate a couple more

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
4th chapter

Are you sure they have not missed or forgotten about this next chapter of yours?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Yes.That's not ok.

Try other resources. Like darkwanderer or lushstories.

tt16tt16over 6 years ago
What happened to chapter 4?

Hey! How is it going? Have you tried to contact moderator? Or post it again?

jones286jones286over 5 years agoAuthor

Chapter 4 now out! I am working on chapter 5 and about to publish another story

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Too

little of a good thing ..............short chapters are a PITA

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Lisa humiliates Melanie

Lisa prepared Melanie for being taken by James and decided Melanie had to submit to a black woman like herself before being submissive to a black man. She initiates Melanie into forced lesbian seduction tiebreak down completely her resistance. Once Melanie submits to Lisa,she's rendered more docile to the more superior black race.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
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Good story,

I very much enjoyed this tale from the cucks perspective. His humiliation was Palpable.

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