by wishfulthinking
Please Please Please continue this.
Powerful , erotic and a great story line waiting to be explored.
I've read the two chapters over 10 times. I really love it. Please write more chapters!
Hope you continue the story. It's intriguing and beguiling on so many levels.
Okay, so, the story line is wonderful. The grammar is not. Please find someone to read it for you before you post it. This one was much better than the first one. Are you going to continue? If you do, I will edit it. Contact me- kerrynesbitt@live.com
I've been reading through your collection, and this world and these people intrigue me so much! I feel like there's so much more here, and I can't wait to read it...so get on with it already :) PLEASE!!
love this story i come back to see uodates . please continue
So glad you picked back up with Melanthe! You are an incredible writer and I absolutely LOVE your stories!
This is another of your great stories. Please continue and finish!
Please oh please oh please don't go away again! I'll be dead and buried before you're finished at the rate of one chapter every 5yrs. Seriously though you are one of my favorite authors here and I need more of your delicious writing.
I really appreciate the effort <3 LOVE THIS CHAPTER SO GOOD EVEN IF ITS NOT EROTIC !!
So pleased to see your name in the New stories. Been ages since I visited and here's one of favs with a wee tib bit.
Wonderful! More more more :-)
No pressure.
Well worth the wait, but pretty please don't make us wait so long for the next!
You have definitely been missed---were you publishing somewhere else?
What a sweet surprise to see your story posted here today. Thank you for the gift of your writing once again - you have been missed!
Delighted you are continuing this story - it very much caught my attention when I read the first chapter. Glad to see you are back writing here, it is always a treat to read one of your stories.
I absolutely loved this story. I was hoping you would continue it and I'm so glad you did. ^_^