All Comments on 'Melissa Smith-Jones Ch. 01'

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MajorRewrite almost 6 years ago

5 stars

Wacko and wild and fun.

Anonymousalmost 6 years ago

that was soooo badass

Melissa is my new favorite literotica girl. please write more. NOW.

RTR10 almost 6 years ago

Can't wait to read about Melissa & her stalker. Who needs Mike? Or Nigel?

jshsalv almost 6 years ago

As always...

Great stuff !!!!! WAITING FOR MORE

legsfeettoes almost 6 years ago

First timer

You write well. First time I've read one of your stories, but I've added you to my Favorite Authors list, so I may read more. Love Melissa! My kind of woman! Not into bondage but definitely into lusty women! Looking forward to the next chapter and hope you are more diligent with your chapters than I am with mine! Five stars. Thanks.

Anonymousalmost 6 years ago

A fun read

I loved the beach scene. I wonder what happens next for this character. Thanks for the story.

JBEdwards almost 6 years agoAuthor

Thanks, Guys!

Thanks for your wonderful comments. I'm glad you like Melissa! Chapter Two is in the works and should appear in a few days. Yours, JB

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