All Comments on 'Mellow Yellow'

Wow. Waiting for act 2.

I think urinating in your shorts on the dance floor would have been a deal breaker, or at least ruined the mood.

This is soo hot. Please continue

My fantasy of double penetration brought to print! What an awesome, well-written, and enticing narrative that allows the reader to experience what is described in mental videos and colorful images. Loved it! Can't wait for part 2!