All Comments on 'Melting in Your Words'

I enjoyed your story quite a bit. I must admit, though, that I had a little trouble at first. I had to go back twice before catching on that you were switching POV. After I got the hang of it, things went smoothly. I hope you do great in the Valentines contest. Best of luck. xoxo

very good read.i enjoyed the back n forth of each others thoughts.And the final end of the story was done well.

Thank you for writing! I look forward to reading many more stories from your amazing imagination (memory?)!

It was an excellent read, and I believe you have an amazing talent. Please write more soon.

An enjoyable story and two lovely lead characters in Ellie and Ari. Akiseerose has a point about your shifting points-of-view. It would help a lot if, when changing POV, you insert the name of the new narrator before her first paragraph (to make the change stronger, the new narrator's name should be in bold or italic text). But this is just a minor quibble and the story as a whole stands up very well.

A lovely story! I really enjoyed it a lot.

I enjoyed this very much. Well done and good luck.

I really loved this - sexy, playful - and of course a great celebration of the seductive power of words. Very nice!

I really enjoyed reading your story. The amount of time and effort you put into this is clearly evident. Thank you for posting and I look forward to reading your other stories. 5 stars from me x

I totaly lost myself in your storry it got my atention from the first word and never lost it

Aldo i do agree with some other comments the switching of caracters could have bin better it does not take anything away from the storry

Realy thank you for this beautiful storry

Hope to read more of you soon

Very different, enjoyable and absorbing.

Thank you.

Great read! I really liked how you gave each of them a unique style that we could associate with them. Also, the pacing worked well for the kind of story you wanted to tell. It did feel like the middle part of story moved slightly faster than I had expected though, given the way you established Ellie as a character, but that may have been deliberate.

I really enjoyed reading this story, thank you for sharing it with us!

... and it worked. I love the way you switched POV and while initially I thought putting the writer's name at the start of the switch would be beneficial in the end I thought the way you did it worked. Surprised there was so little dialogue but again it was different and it worked.

5 stars.

So sweet, so well-written, so hot!

Seriously, it's well thought out, well told and the sex is very exciting. What more could one ask?

wow what a great read had to go back a few times to check who was talking or thinking but i think thats just me and reading at 2am lol keep up the hard work and keep them stories comming,

Alas, I have less time for reading than I'd like. Especially for reading actual, honest to goodness erotica, which is definitely what this story is--a good blend of characters that matter and unabashed raunchiness skillfully blended. Yeah, there were a couple of mistakes, but the story is good, and the characters are good, and overall the read is good--and it's actually erotic! Thak you. Well done!

We literature majors love erotica. Given us another one soon

Wow, what a brilliant and story! Top marks to undergraduate student Ellie Haida for passion and originality. And that little bit of tension to keep the reader guessing.

A stunningly good read. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.

I loved this so much. Lesbian librarians is a kink I never knew I needed this much.

Did someone say sequel.

Not gonna lie, I looked in your works and online for the series mentioned in this story. It was a solid read and I enjoyed it very much so thank you for sharing, and I look forward to reading more of your work!

Very fun and romantic.

Another great work from a great writer.

I've only just found you, and already this is the fourth story I've read. I love them all.