All Comments on 'Melvin's Magic Love Juice Ch. 09'

love it. loved everything about it. that pinch of drama just made this story nicer

I like the fic, as I like to see MCs with some goodness in them. Yet still having lots of sex.

But I feel sad for Melvin in the last bit of the story. I hope that he ends up with happiness at the end of the story. (Perhaps with a few lovers involved who truely love him.)

If not, maybe I could bribe you to write an alterntive version as well.

Thanks.

C.King

(Additional, unfinished stories at Mcstories.com)

now that i re-read it, the ending was a little sad for poor melvin. wonder who he'll end up with...

personally if it was me in his shoes, i want morgan the witch