by wajawhiii
Your comments such as "...those that didn't do well on the SAT" and similar in other stories, do more to call out your own insecurities than diminish or insult others. Lest you attempt to attack me, I've been a member of American Mensa for over forty years and find your comments offensive and sad. Are you lauding your intellect because you're lacking in other endowments?
What an interesting and well told story.
Yes, there was some obvious enhancements, but still somewhat believable.
I can understand the Anonymous comments based on the "Mensa" bullshit.
Ignore these assholes and keep writing what you are comfortable with.