All Comments on 'Mended Hearts Ch. 01'

Please continue. This happened many times with me and my Mom, but it was the opposite. My Dad was a cold man that didn’t take care of my Moms needs. Many times she asked me to run her back all the way to her feet. She wore mesh panties and I would fantasize about pulling them down and taking care of her. She had a very full bush. My parents separated for a few years and my Mom moved out. I would stay with her occasionally and she wore very short nightgowns and would ask me to sleep in her bed once in a while. Nothing ever happened. When she would leave for the day, I would sniff her panties and they were the most beautiful scent I ever smelled.

Was thinking something would happen, but instead you want to draw it out longer than neede.

Ch. 2. soon, please!

Needs a lot more dialogue and you need to pick up the pace of this story, it's dragging. Thanks!

Pls. Post the sequel.....much needed....very hot first part....hats off

Please add another chapter. I’m hooked on this cliffhanger!

The last sentence was a jump scare. I literally flinched out of reflex lmao

Awesome story but you need a follow up, don't just leave us hanging!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Vey nice story gave it 4 stars but will you add another chapter?

Liked the story. But where's the incest??????????? You just stopped when it could have gotten better. 4 stars

Likes it but no incest please add more??? 4Stars