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colin23colin23over 11 years ago
Misspelling

Please note the spelling of straitjacket. The jacket is strait (= , narrow, tight), not straight.

DepthsOfDualityDepthsOfDualityover 11 years agoAuthor
Crits

Yep, you're right. That's was a pretty dumb error. I guess my proof reading missed it.

Any comments out there on what I can improve?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Amazing!

I've always had a thing for crazies so to read about it and envision it, is like a dream come true. Good job and keep writing amazing stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
That was nice, really nice!

You did a great job. Bravo! Keep writing! Hot hot hot!

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