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All Comments on 'Merchant & Monster Girls Ch. 01'

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jwbailey00jwbailey00over 2 years ago

Needs editing, the conversations are hard to follow sometimes

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

More please

luissaluissaover 2 years ago

I like a lot Thanks

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

I like the story so far, lets see what other chapters and how they develop. AAAA++++

redpoppiesredpoppiesover 2 years ago

You have an interesting imagination. Your dialogs were hard to follow, tho. If you use the correct punctuation and grammar when creating dialog we readers will have no trouble following your story and you will get more readers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Amazing story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love this series

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is not a closed harem story. All the girls can take it from anyone they pass in the street.

Not joking.

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This is my first foray into the genre erotic writing. I enjoy designing/world building and wanted an outlet for my creativity as well as a way to practice writing. Given how much this story has expanded from my initial idea it'll be my main focus with the occasional unrelated ...

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